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I'm sorry

You were standing so tall
You nearly reached the skies

But then I made you fall
And you are she who cries

For all her life
She believed what she now calls lies

That 'Practice makes perfect' or 'Your effort is worth it'

I'm sorry
It's my fault

You were a queen with your crown
But then I brought you down

By getting rid of that crown of yours you treasured so

I didn't want to hurt you
Nor did I mean to

I'm sorry
I'm such a fool

To think I'm good enough to even know you
"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry,"
I say

But you say nothing and run away

I'm not someone you knew even though you denied
I'm sorry for lying and making you cry

But if I'm nothing but an obstacle in your life
Then I'll die

Only if it'll make you happy
But I'm sure it shall

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry,"

I say

But I get no reply
And my voice withers away

I tried
I'm sorry
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KayaArune Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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KayaArune Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
//huuugs//
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Mangastar66 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Ahhhh nooo that's not true!!! :iconsawbplz:
But good writing, by the way! c:
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
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i'm so sorry ; A ;
and thanku ; - ;
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Mangastar66 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Naaah, there's no need to be sorry :iconyuihugplz:
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wow in awe
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Thank you :iconyuicry2plz:
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your welcome
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TheMalloryPerson Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another great piece. 
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thank you ; v ;
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You're welcome. 
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TheMalloryPerson Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*dies of adorableness* 
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//revives
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MicroMezzo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaww theres nothing wrong if you try then you wont cry or I wont cry 
if you lie then then you should deserve a pie
my lil knight if you fail then dont think fast be my snail and go slowly
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Hime sama ; v ;
Thank you
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MicroMezzo Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww your welcome i can hear you at first you seemed frustrated then when you were tyoing i can hear it change to sad after reading that comment you felf relieved and happy
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hime sama
you are my world
without you the sky will start falling down and the world with start to crumble and shake
the sea will flood and drwon me with sorrow
without you
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aaaaaaaaawwww heheh i cna hear your heart feeling calm and excited full of joy
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HIME SAMA
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aaaaawwwwww
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HIME SAMA
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