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Once upon a time
There was a girl

She had no friends
Just a family
Who didn't seem to care a bit
Not a single bit

She said not a word
Not a single phrase

She just spent her days
Drawing and drawing

Like always

As she grew older
She became more depressed

More lonely

Since no one could see her
Not that it mattered

To them

She cries to sleep at night

If she cries where no one is
Will someone ever hear?

If someone did

Would they stay
Or go away?

Like the rest who knew her

When she wanted to cry
She held it in

And waits for the rest
To fade

When no one's looking
Where no one shall hear her voice at all

After
She continues drawing

She's tired of crying
She's tired of lying

She's tired of wearing this mask
But she still does

So no one shall know
The pain she's hiding

Through her hardships
And pain

She's still her stoic and nostalgic self

She couldn't change who she was
She was like this from the start

Even though
People tried to paint her in their own way

She still remained the same

And she always will
Even if she doesn't want to

And today

She still stands tall
Through her endless winter
With no light

And today
People still don't care

Whether she's stands
Or falls

She's just waiting for that hand

That hand from so long ago
That hand that helped

From years ago

She wanted to die
She didn't want this anymore

She felt like she was a waste


But she isn't gone
She's still here

She still sheds tears

But some from warmth
Of a sun made by one

And she's not gonna leave

She's not
Not yet

She'll remain how she is
Even if she's a puzzle

Even though she made no sense to those around


She's still here

Since her dream isn't completed
Oh no, not yet

But she knows she'll get there

She's still here

Since she her dream is to make others smile
Even if it only lasts awhile

She hasn't found her purpose
Not yet

Even if she's a 'freak'

She'll still be here
Today
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I wanna see if you guys would read this and figure this out
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But you probably will
Hopefully

Thank you :icondarkzero2109: ; w ;
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TheMalloryPerson Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE IT!!! 
THANK YOU FOR THIS! :iconglompplz:

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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
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THANK YOU~~~! :iconyuiglompplz:
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TheMalloryPerson Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome! :D
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DarkZero2109 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. Seriously, I love it.

I do have a little suggestion. I think that "lonelier" should simply be "lonely". I'm not sure about the correctness of using "lonelier", but I think "lonely" would fit better.
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
True
I was thinking about what I should use xD
since I'm not really good at thish e - e
But  thank you and i shall use your suggestion~! :iconjunesplz: :iconasdfghplz:
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DarkZero2109 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconedgeybowplz: I'm honored that you would take my suggestion.
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MahiganTheNeko Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hang in there Julie!
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
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Thank you ; - ;
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MahiganTheNeko Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
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