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What kills me everyday
Is all the words you say

Not the bricks, sticks and stones
That always break my bones 

But every syllable you say
That causes my heart to wither away

They trample on it like a flower
I'm waiting for the hour

The hour where everything is done
When someone has finally won

What pained me everyday
Was all those words you say

The fading echo of your voice that used to be heard
Doesn't say a single word
What pains me everyday
Was that smile on your face

Which caused me
To never push you away
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I loved this, keep writing your good
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Thanks ~~! ; v ;
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KayaArune Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
; n;
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
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//crawls to a corner
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yo1000 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
whoa
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
yes?
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student General Artist
This is a gorgeous piece :)
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Thanks~~! ; v ;
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silver-moonwolf Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Your very welcome! <33
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Amadious24 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's pure emotion! I do like it for that. 
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Thank you ~~! :iconyuihugplz:
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ZeekVampire Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014   Traditional Artist
WOAAHHH!!! I felt the impact of this poem!!!! 
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
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Thank you~~! ;;;;;;;;;
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MicroMezzo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwwww too strrrrrong
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
hime sama
ahsdgfhzxk
i am sorrry
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MicroMezzo Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
noonono its fiiiiiiiiiine
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
are you sure :iconshotaplz:
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MicroMezzo Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
im fiiiiiiiiiiiine
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KokoroIChan Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
okie :iconuhuhuhuplz:
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MicroMezzo Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you soo adoraableeee
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